not bad for your second!
10 for hard work put in! 10 for animation itself as it was your 2nd try! considering it was good. but 8 and 9 because the music, blood and graphic were kinds bad. but anyway! overall still 10!!
i really want to know what your third is gonna be? u might wanna imporve by putting faster pace so that it can earn the viewer's attention. slow-motion are recommended but not that slow.. still, your a noob and so am i :). we both got areas of improvement also. simple story, maybe rather long and boring though(no offence).
still looking forward for your next aniamtion :D